Wednesday, August 15, 2007

corrected version for group 2's persuasive speech ( body )

Abortion is not just a simple medical procedure but is a life changing event with significant physical and emotional consequnces. Clinical research has proven that going for an abortion can cause pysychological harm to some women. Abortion is very risky and there are more than 200 women who have died from legal abortions. Not only that, but women who survive abortions have a high risk of suffering form complications later on and long term physical complications can even damge the linig of the uterus and cause permenant infertility.Therefore, as you can see, ladies and gentlemen, abortion does not only kill the baby's life, but it can kill the mother too or affect the mother physically and also emotionally.

Abortion is also harmful to our nation. It corrupts our younger generation by encouraging them to engage in casual intercourse. If they created new life accidentally, they know they can just abort it to escape all the burdens that come with it. Did you notice the rates of youngsters having abortions or sex at young ages have rose up? This shows how serious this issue has become.

1st paragraph by audrey, second by emily

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